#2
I like this. the chord progression is pretty cool and upbeat....kind of like you have no choice but to tap your foot along with it or something. I think you have a good voice but it is sort of disguised by the guitar because its a little hard to hear you. i just like it when the melody of the vocals pops out of you. so i think this is definetely worth re-recording. and make the vocals a little clearer and more defined. other than that i thought this was a really great song. very good songwriting skills.

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=537058