#1
I think the worst is finally over
The uncertainty is coming to an end
It’s time to laugh again and maybe find a lover
And start it all up again

It’s been so long since I’ve been together
It’s been so long since I’ve seen your face
Being alone teaches you some lessons
It shows you who’re your friends are in the end

I think the worst is finally over
The uncertainty is coming to an end
It’s time to laugh again and maybe find a lover
And start it all up again

Yeah, I’ve seen some unfamiliar faces
And I’ve been somewhere I never expected
I’ve seen some new places, been covering the bases
But I’ve had to forget some past regrets

I think the worst is finally over
The uncertainty is coming to an end
It’s time to laugh again and maybe find a lover
And start it all up again

Maybe we’ll begin
When I see you again
But maybe we’ll never start
So many things I’ve been
I just wanted to know when
The things would be gone
that were keeping us apart

Don't give away the ending
some people like suspense
I just wanna get this over
and forget all my past mistakes

I think the worst is finally over
The uncertainty is coming to an end
It’s time to laugh again and maybe find a lover
And start it all up again
Last edited by guitardan76 at Mar 8, 2007,
#2
hey, i really liked it. it seems like the kind of music that i write for my band waggyplank. check us out if you want. is there anyway that we can keep in touch, and with my guitar parts, if i make this a song, and we record it, and show it to you, would that be alright? if so pm me. good job dude
Travis
#4
This song has massive potential. This is also in the vain of something that I would write and I can relate to this a lot as well.

Here are the changes I made to the song...

I think the worst is finally over
The uncertainty is coming to an end
It’s time to laugh again and maybe find a lover Maybe you should change this line to "It's time to find another lover." I think it flows better, at least with the melody I have in my head for this
And start it all up again

It’s been so long since I’ve been together Should the "I've" in this line be "We've"
It’s been so long since I’ve seen your face
Being alone teaches you some lessons Being alone teaches you so many lessons"
It shows you who’re your friends are in the end

I think the worst is finally over
The uncertainty is coming to an end
It’s time to laugh again and maybe find a lover
And start it all up again

Yeah, I’ve seen some unfamiliar faces
And I’ve been somewhere I never expected I might change this to "I've been to places I never expected"
I’ve seen some new places, been covering the bases And you could change this line to "Spent so much time covering the bases"
But I’ve had to forget some past regrets

I think the worst is finally over
The uncertainty is coming to an end
It’s time to laugh again and maybe find a lover
And start it all up again

Maybe we’ll begin
When I see you again
But maybe we’ll never start
So many things I’ve been
I just wanted to know when
The things would be gone
that were keeping us apart I would think about changing this bridge, but I'm not sure how exactly.

I think the worst is finally over
The uncertainty is coming to an end
It’s time to laugh again and maybe find a lover
And start it all up again

-- Overall, this is a good song. There are some things that I would change but it's an awsome start. Check out my song "Shine" if you have the time. the link is in my sig.

Peace...Anthony