#1
Next time we touch is so far away
The time we had seems wasted
Great memories we have always shared
my thoughts of you seem impaired

Looking back on the moments
the life you had was extraordinary
the empty family brings us tears
well-chosen and sorrowful
#5
This thread is improperly titled. Check out the FAQ at the top of this forum for the rules. You pretty much just need to re-post it with a proper title.
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#7
Quote by Negative+Creep
Alright you guys are a bunch of whiny bitches. Just review the goddamn song.



After that? Fat fuckin' chance. We're pointing out the rules, and the rules say you need a title. And that's not a title, or at least it sure as hell isn't written like one.

And frankly, I don't want to waste my time critting something from someone who doesn't know the rules.
Poor advice.
#9
It's just a matter of keeping things clean on the forum. Otherwise, things get pretty nasty in here, and it's frustrating to keep up with.

Lets be honest here. It would take you less time to simply copy and paste your lyrics into a new thread, and title it "A Love Song" then it would take you to post the following:

- The title of the song is "A love song"
- And thanks for the review
- Alright you guys are a bunch of whiny bitches. Just review the goddamn song.
- Shut the **** up. You really are a whiny bitch

And on top of that, I'm sure both stellar legs and I would have crit you by now, and perhaps some others. A lot of people just ignore improper threads without even looking at them.
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Last edited by Revalk at Mar 7, 2007,
#10
See that's what I like to see. A good explanation. Not just, read the rules. You did it wrong.

I won't be though. I think it's dumb to do that. But thanks
#11
Quote by Negative+Creep
Alright you guys are a bunch of whiny bitches. Just review the goddamn song.


*cocks gun*

Quote by Negative+Creep
Shut the **** up. You really are a whiny bitch


*bang!*


Revalk and Stellar are right. Now read the FAQ.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.
#12
Quote by The Hurt Within
*cocks gun*


*bang!*


Revalk and Stellar are right. Now read the FAQ.

Lol........................