#1
Here is a metal riff I made this morning...I've been playing about 1.5 months and I will make a better version of this riff eventually cause my hands were really cold when I made this, but I just wanted to get it out there and see what people thought of it. Its pretty simple, but I like it. Thanks for listening.

http://media.putfile.com/metal-riff-1-86
#2
It sounds very familiar. Can't put my finger on it.
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#3
Pretty kilshé riff. I often play riffs like that when im nervous. I think I have sometime played exactly the same riff you played.
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#4
Quote by Hypetreme
Pretty kilshé riff. I often play riffs like that when im nervous. I think I have sometime played exactly the same riff you played.



yeah, it is a very generic riff and I don't think its special but I will be incorporating it in a song and adding some flair and speed, but thats the "skeleton" i guess you could call it.
Last edited by LordBattlecrisp at Mar 7, 2007,
#6
Quote by LordBattlecrisp
BTW, i'm guessing you meant "cliche"?


Yeah I meant that, sorry my TYPO
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Schecter Hellraiser C-1
ENGL Thunder 50 E322
Framus 2x12 Cab
Yamaha HS50M


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#7
Quote by Hypetreme
Yeah I meant that, sorry my TYPO


I appreciate your honesty in saying that its cliche...Gives me motivation to improve it
#9
Quote by IAMIDY
I think it's very generic, but it has the potential to turn into a really good riff


thank you, i agree