#1
... it's really not that deep....

haha


Rinse Wash and Repeat (Gary)


Verse 1

You think you're hardcore
You're shoes say Green Day
Circle A around your wrist
Your favortie store
Is Hot Topic
Corporate sell-out bitch

Verse 2

You're anti-Bush
You're anti-God
You're anti-evertything
You don't know shit
Don't think for you self
Just rinse wash and repeat

Chorus/Outro

Rinse, wash, and repeat
(Don't think)

Verse 3

You're a stereotype
A ****in' cliche
The same kid
With a different face
Go to the show
**** up the scene
We'll make you scream
We'll make you bleed

Verse 4

You're a poser kid
Listenin' to gateway shit
Someday I hope you'll know why
That punks a life
And not a fad
Something you cannot buy
#2
I like it, but it seems kinda cliché, which seems to be what you were writing against. One constructive crit:
Quote by PunkNDrublic318

Verse 3

You're a stereotype
A ****in' cliche
The same kid
With a different face
Go to the show
**** up the scene
We'll make you scream
We'll make you bleed


Could those two lines be swapped perhaps? I think they'd fit better, and they'd rhyme, which (to me) is an added bonus.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=8484967#post8484967