#1
If you read my other post that got closed you'll know I'm new to writing like this n blah blah blah .. ok then

Power of Love
By: ... Me a.k.a Tolga lol

Great destinations
with the city on my back
Great inspirations
and a funky beat on the track
Play to the world
while floating with the green
Come on!

-Guitar Solo-

Shine with the city
and play to the night
live with no pity
and live for the fight
this is your life
so live it to your dreams

-chorus with diff guitar-
And then you'll know ...
And then you'll know ...
to live your life with love
and then you'll know ...2x
the power of your love!

live with your beauty
and give her all your love
give to your family
aid peace with the dove
give joy with some laughter
and passion with your heart

-another guitar color-

-Chorus 2x-
Last edited by SacredxSuperman at Mar 8, 2007,
#3
Quote by Something_Vague
Huey Lewis?
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...
...
and the news?


Until I just googled what you said, I didn't know that this guy Huey Lewis had a song with the same name to be honest ... oh well.
#5
Quote by SacredxSuperman
If you read my other post that got closed you'll know I'm new to writing like this n blah blah blah .. ok then

Power of Love
By: ... Me a.k.a Tolga lol

Great destinations
with the city on my back
Great inspirations
and a funky beat on the track


Change funky to something else, it sounds way out of place in this song.
#6
Quote by S)E-Javelin
Change funky to something else, it sounds way out of place in this song.


hmm ... any possible suggestions to that.
#7
Quote by SacredxSuperman
hmm ... any possible suggestions to that.


Um...

Great inspirations
and a clearing beat on the track.

I don't know, something like that I guess.
#9
Quote by Burpin'Worm
The line: "and passion with your hear" doesn't make sense to me.


yeah thats suppose to say heart, thanks for pointing that out, i fixed it up.