#1
Very short, but it's meant to be a slow song so the words are drawn out.
Any questions, feel free to post. Concrit welcome.

Reminders.


Dark roads bring back memories,
And I realize that truthfully,
I lost myself when I let you go.

And now the streets are empty,
And I tell myself, that honestly.
I can never let you know,

The highway curve still reminds me of your smile.
#2
this is pretty good. I almost immediatlly heard a melody that can go with these lyrics. not bad.
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#3
my only thing with it is that i wouldnt post anything online without copyrighting it first, assuming you hold it dear. all it takes is one guy with writers block to take it and make it theirs. doesnt seem bad though, not what id listen to particularly, but not bad.