#1
It Doesn't Matter What you Say....Just As long As you Say it
If you Wanna Help Make the Song Better....Go Right A Head


I’m Laid Down In your Arms
Sent To My Small World
It’s Not Like Love
You Know it Still Feels Empty
I Know It’s Never Easy
I Know I Can Never Say
What I Always Need To
Has Know One Told You I’m So Broken?
So Just Leave Me Down To Die

[Chorus::]
So Please Don’t Say Sorry
Please Never Say Good-bye
Just Tell Me You Still Love Me
And you Still need To Hold Me
I Don’t Need A Reason Why.
I Know Its Hard To Live Alone
Because I Still Can’t Live Without You

I’m Falling Into Your Weak Arm's
And I’m Falling So far From My Dream
Can you Stop Me From my Nightmares?
Because I Could See The Better Side Of this World
You Make This World seem so Perfect
So let me fall
In The World you Call Home

[Chorus]

Don’t Tell Me I Can’t Take It
Don’t Try And Watse it
All That’s Left Of My Yesterdays
Can Still keep Tearing

[Chorus]
Last edited by *Thundernation* at Mar 8, 2007,
#2
I’m Laid Down In your Arms
Sent To My Small World
It’s Not Like Love
You Know it Still Feels Empty
I Know It’s Never Easy
I Know I Can Never Say
What I Always Need To
Has Know One Told You I’m So Broken?
So Just Leave Me Down To Die
I like it, except if it is a slower song, I would take out the part about death. Just my thoughts though.


[Chorus::]
So Please Don’t Say Sorry
Please Never Say Good-bye
Just Tell Me You Still Love Me
And you Still need To Hold Me
I Don’t Need A Reason Why.
I Know Its Hard To Live Alone
Because I Still Can’t Live Without You
I really REALLY like the chorus. I can't see any problems.


I’m Falling Into Your Weak Arm's
And I’m Falling So far From My Dream
Can you Stop Me From my Nightmares?
Because I Could See The Better Side Of this World
You Make This World seem so Perfect
So let me fall
In The World you Call Home
Great man, absolutely superb. Again, I see no problems with it.


[Chorus]

Don’t Tell Me I Can’t Take It
Don’t Try And Waste it
All That’s Left Of My Yesterdays
Can Still keep Tearing
The only part I dont like about this, is the fact that you end two lines (in a row I might add) with the same word. Sorry, I just don't like this part.


[Chorus]


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Wow man. Very Wow. I think it is excellent. Very very well done. I can't wait to hear it put to some chords, and maybe even a little solo. It will sound great once it's recorded. Very nice man.