#1
Unmentioned Words About Love and Hate

Im sorry that your last,
memories of me,
were titled goodbye,
but next time you think of me,
smile, please?

In exchange for your love I give you my heart,
For the rest of our lives until death do us part,
Is what I meant when I said forever and a day,

OKAYYY............

Now I'm sitting,
on these porch steps,
with a dozen red roses,
and a note that reads,

Im sorry that your last,
memories of me,
were titled goodbye,
but next time you think of me,
smile, please?

Now as I lay you down beneath the trees,
your mother has a message for me,
She said you were going to tell me,

Im sorry that your last,
memory of me,
was titled goodbye,
but each time you think of me,
smile, don't cry please?

please give me a full crit..will crit back
My gear:
1982 Peavey Falcon
2004 Les Paul
2006 Peavey Transtube
2007 Youngblood 100w cab
2002 Dean Playmate Bass
2002 Dean Bassola