#1
Alright, so I was playing around with some chords, started recording and messing about with lyrics and the result is HERE.

Since I just threw the lyrics out on the spot like that, they're not exactly mentally challenging... I'd like to hear more about my voice, which is what I've really been trying to get right, and my guitar. Is the plucking boring? I thought about having a little variation in it at some point, acoustic solo like.

Thanks in advance, please leave a linky if you feel like.
#4
I think your idea with a little varying of the acoustic guitar/solo would be great. You have a nice voice, though, and this song was pretty relaxing. It was a little repetitive, but I still liked it. If you add a few more parts (mainly on guitar), I think it would be a ton better. Good job. Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091