#2
I liked the effect on the vocals. The guitar tone was a little weak souding for the chords, but for the individual notes it sounded pretty good. That reverby effect works well on the vocals, though. I liked the melody and lyrics, and the trippy sounding vox. It sounded pretty good, but dragged on a little - it's pretty long and a little too repetitive for that length- over 5min. It was good, though. What was that noise thing at the end? Mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=522091
#3
I think you could work more with the mood and whatnot if the quality was higher.
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