Walkin' down the river
Wearin' no coat
I'm going blind
And there’s nowhere to go

You're gone now and i know
All i can do is run
And that is what i get
for staring at the sun

In a dark place
Under the sea
Blossoms and petals
Under mud and debris

I can’t see you
And you’re just walking away
I cant hear you
But I know you’re walking away

Flowers fluttering in the sky among you
And I cant look away
I’m going blind
And I need a Holiday

(Sweet Guitar Solo)

Its just that you’re gone now and
All I can do is run
But that’s just what I get
for staring at the sun

OK pretty simple ABCB Lots of meaning to me. Critique. Thanks
Last edited by ylwmattrcustrd at Mar 9, 2007,
Wow, that was awesome. It flowed smoothly and I think the word choice is excellent. Simple. Sweet. To the point. And not to mention the (Sweet Guitar Solo) part. Good Job

cool but there's already a song called blind by KoRn so mabye you might want to think of something else.

good lyrics though
Well give me a better name then and Korn is shit. It was called staring at the sun before but theres about fifty songs with that name. U2 and The Offspring to name a few I know.