#1
Hey I've written this new song called "The Ides of March" - not to be confused with iron Maiden's song of the same name!

The song is about the middle of March, as the title suggests - it's an optimistic tune about finally getting some bloody sun!!!

The singing's a little ropey as I've had flu al week but i just wanted to get this finished

Please let me know how you think the production and stuff could be improved as that's what I'm concentrating on - my playing isn't too hot but that will improve with practice

I'll return everyone's crit, hope you like it.

The download is at http://shminty.dmusic.com/music/

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#2
Oh come on 24 views but no-one could be arsed to crit!!! I guess that's Friday night for ya!
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#3
hey man i know how it is lol

Pretty ****in groovy

Didnt like it at first, but i gave it a thourough listen dude, the guitar solo's and your guitar tone reached out and grabbed me, your voice is alright.. i was groovin on it man, good song.

cheak out my song on the originals page
#4
theres something about your voice that i really like, especially in your lower register. id love to hear something like this when youre feeling better. pretty cool lead tone, the timing sounded off in places, but like you said just keep practicing. nice ending too, good work man keep it up.
mind critting mine?
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#5
Hey Peaceful Rocker, thanks for giving it a go on spite of your first impressions! It's really much appreciated! I tried to do something interesting with the various guitar tones, so I'm really happy you liked them

Hi Allstrats, I'm glad you liked my voice - I'm not altogether satisfied with it right now as my sister's is much better so when I listen to mine it just sounds rubbish haha! Glad you liked the tone to, I must be doing something right! I'm gonna keep on working on the guitar playing, I think I'm going in the right direction.

Thanks for the crits uys I'll get right onto yours today
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#6
Ok, now I've resubmitted the track with some eq and volume changes, it's also been slightly remixed. Hope some people can find the time to have a listen and comment - C4C of course!!!
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