#1
Now everyone just carry on
Cause up next is a horrible song
Yes Virgin, keep staring at her thong
The slut acts like nothing's going on
Leopard print on her thong you say it is
I know you wanna rush back and tell your friends
It's sad you won't have any kids
Cause being sterile is a son of a bitch
Your life supposedly sucks
Minus well put on make-up
And give blowjobs for 200 bucks

Look at you
You're a goddamn fool
People run screaming when you get to the pool
Fatty
Eat another motherfucking meat patty
Stop making your pillow sad
Because you cry in it because your life is supposedly bad

You know what, I don't give a fuck anymore
I don't care if you cry and run through the door
What's making me mad
Is you're acting so sad
Cause you think your life is bad
When you should be glad
Cause you're living a life a lot of people don't have
Believe me, they want it
Like innocent people on Americas Most Wanted
So go outside
Look at the sky
And tell yourself why
You're glad to be alive
Last edited by glm at Mar 10, 2007,
#2
Haha, that's really funny actually. xD

I love it.

Although this part...

What's making me mad
Is you're acting so sad
Cause you think your life is bad
When you should be glad


The rhyming is a little... meh.

This would be an awesome song though. ;D
#4
LOL I like.
According to BS statistics, 92% of teens have moved on to rap. If you're among the 8% who doesn't consider rap to be real music, donate your brains, as you clearly aren't using them.
#5
Fatty
Eat another mother****ing meat patty

That actually made me laugh outloud.


Hmmmmm... "Because you cry in it because your life is supposedly bad"... BECAUSE.
Guitarrist living in the Kitchener/Waterloo area and looking to join a band.
#6
I think the reason someone like that would actually think their life is bad, is because people like you bag them... *sigh* anti flame shield...
#7
Quote by glm
Now everyone just carry on
Cause up next is a horrible song
Yes Virgin, keep staring at her thong
The slut acts like nothing's going on
Leopard print on her thong you say it is
I know you wanna rush back and tell your friends
It's sad you won't have any kids
Cause being sterile is a son of a bitch
Your life supposedly sucks
Minus well put on make-up

And give blowjobs for 200 bucks

Look at you
You're a goddamn fool
People run screaming when you get to the pool
Fatty
Eat another motherfucking meat patty

Stop making your pillow sad
Because you cry in it because your life is supposedly bad

You know what, I don't give a fuck anymore
I don't care if you cry and run through the door
What's making me mad
Is you're acting so sad
Cause you think your life is bad
When you should be glad
Cause you're living a life a lot of people don't have
Believe me, they want it
Like innocent people on Americas Most Wanted
So go outside
Lookk at the sky And tell yourself why
You're glad to be alive


i bolded my favorite lines, pretty good i have to say, it'd make an awsome rap!

#8
dude thats fuking ausome....its funny too....i was laughing out loud...haha.....and gooooood ryhms too
#11
Quote by Smoothie
Fatty
Eat another mother****ing meat patty

That actually made me laugh outloud.


Hmmmmm... "Because you cry in it because your life is supposedly bad"... BECAUSE.


Because he's a fat virgin.
#12
I like it man. The only thing i don't really like is the fact that the second and third stanza have a bit of the same rhyme scheme in them. And the thing that i dont like on top of that, you happen to use a lot of the same words in both stanzas. Still pretty good man