#2
Well, i don't like it. Too simple, too much synth no solo and too ****ing happy. But for pop fans I guess it might score a 6/10

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#3
^Thanks. Yeah, thats kind of the idea. Keep it short and simple. I'm tired of complexity, so I'm just working on basic stuff now. Thanks again for the crit.
#4
I started off with pop-punk, so I will tell you that it's got a decent chorus part.
Needs more dynamic changes though, and an intro and ending
#5
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Well, i don't like it. Too simple, too much synth no solo and too ****ing happy. But for pop fans I guess it might score a 6/10

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just because you dont like a genre doesnt mean you have to be so negative. When you open a pop punk song, expect simplicity. Dont crit a pop punk song and say it has no solo and is simple-u'll look stupid

and if u want to make it as a band, many people on ug dont understand that today, just to make it, you have to be simple. once youve made it then u can change your style

-to the song, nice pop punk,but aliitle annoying ummmmm8/10
#6
catchy 7/10
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#7
Sounds good to me, lots of people on UG will put this down for no good reason though.

8/10.