#1
KATE

kate, yeah kate
why did you have to be a bitch,
why did you do that,
you fu-cken suck kate,
do you even care you heartless alien from mars,
you deserve to die,
im gunna go all hannibal lector on your ass
i hate you, you, you....

KATE YOU SLUT SLUT BITCH SKANK RANDOM *****!!!!!
KATE YOU SLUt HOT SEXY *****!!!!!
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KISS DAVE ON TEH DANCE FLOOR!!!
YOU STUPID BITCH I HOPE YOU GO DIE!!!!!!


yeah so what do you guys think?
Some Guy?
#2
You seem mad.

Maybe you could tone done the lyrics in this song a little.... there a little strong....

Sounds very punkrockish.
#3
kate, yeah kate
why did you have to be a bitch,
why did you do that,
you fu-cken suck kate,
do you even care you heartless alien from mars,
you deserve to die,
im gunna go all hannibal lector on your ass
i hate you, you, you....
I don't like the aliens from mars part. The Misfits did that so don't take it! Otherwise great man.


KATE YOU SLUT SLUT BITCH SKANK RANDOM *****!!!!!
KATE YOU SLUt HOT SEXY *****!!!!!
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KISS DAVE ON TEH DANCE FLOOR!!!
YOU STUPID BITCH I HOPE YOU GO DIE!!!!!!
I actually like this part, because a similar situation happened to me. Except I just wrote little screamo songs in my head. I like it man, full of anger, good stuff.


All in all, i think it's good. Not the best but i like it.
You got spunk kid.


P.S. Dave, GO DIE!!!!!
#4
lol, it was kind of a joke

the whole "dave" thing didn't happen i just thought i would make a angry punk song for fun, took me about a minute

ill probably tame it down a notch see if ill make a song out of it
Some Guy?
#5
overall its not BAD but its not top notch. it could use some work. Keep at it and this song could have potential. You must not like this kate girl :P.

TO be honest when I opened this I thought it was gonna be a love song... haha was I wrong or what?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=541340
#7
Quote by teenage riot
That actually made me laugh so much frickin' ace man.

Angry punk songs FTW!!


yeah, that was the main intention, humour

ill add some more and post it soon
Some Guy?