#1
So this is the extremely rare case where I write lyrics about something sad. I imagine this set to a folky Simon & Garfunkel style song. Definately not Emo. Well, here's what I've got so far....


A setting sun my eyes survey
On clear blue crystals I transfix
I recognize it clear as day
While scanning incandecent optics

In your eyes a story is told
Of civilizations felled to the sea
What terrible power these portals do hold
I pray it be memory... surely it's not me
"There is no greater love than this, that a man would lay down his life for his friend." - Jesus
#2
Repost this with a proper title, cause it's gonna get closed...

I like it though. I'll crit it proper in a bit.