#1
They don't rhyme, but it some ways they do. A lot of my songs I wrote are influenced by Metallica because they've always been my number 1 favorite band. And Kirk Hammett is the best. So read them and tell me what you think. Just be careful you don't read the second one with the first one, lol. Here they are:

Broken Society

What happened to this society?
What happened to this population?
What happened to humanity?

What happened to justice?
Justice sits blindly in court
Justice is prisoner in the hands of law

What happened to dignity?
Dignity is raped from you
Dignity is murdered from you

What happened to honor?
Honor is lost by war
Honor is bombed by those who hate

Discrimination is fueled by everything
Sexism is fueled by insecurity
Ignorance is fueled by everyone

(Chorus)
This society is ragged like clothes
This society is frayed like paper
This society is busted like glass
Broken Society

I see this society crumbling down into bits
Our society is falling down
I see this society crawling with no wits

I see humanity becoming disgusting
Humans are filthy animals
I see humanity becoming stomach-turning

Hate is repulsive and love is repellent
I see neither hate nor love
I see nothing but a broken society

(Chorus)
This society is ragged like clothes
This society is frayed like paper
This society is busted like glass
Broken Society

Are we fighting for freedom or death?
Are we fighting for justice or cruelty?
Are we fighting for love or hate?

Our wars are throbbing
Our wars are malevolence
Our wars are nerve racking

We clash for those who are weak
We come to blows and get nothing back
But what can you do?

We pay our duty with our teeth
We pay our existence with our arms
We pay our kingdom with our legs

People only care about their shoes
People only care about their clothes
But do people care about themselves?

What happened to pride?
Pride is burnt to the soul
Pride is stripped to the bone

What happened to freedom of speech?
Freedom of speech is lost in the tongue
Freedom of speech is penalized

Murder is fed fifty years of feeding time
Abuse is fed twenty years of sitting time
Electrified souls are chained to walls

Save our society from revulsion
Save our society from torture
Oh God save us from obliteration

(Chorus)
This society is ragged like clothes
This society is frayed like paper
This society is busted like glass
Broken Society

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Nerve Racking Pain


Oh God, this pain is unbearable
Oh God, this pain is excruciating
Oh God, this pain is horrendous
Oh God, just let this pain continue

Take a screw driver and drill into my brain
Take a sledge hammer and break my teeth
Take pliers and pull out my nails
Induce me into nerve racking pain

Take an ice pick and poke me
Take a switch blade and stab me
Take a shotgun and shoot me

Take off my arms and legs
Take off my fingers and toes
Take off my mouth and nose
Take off my eyes and ears

Pull out my intelligence
Pull out my spirit
Pull out my appetite
Pull out my strength

Pull out my lungs
Pull out my liver
Pull out my muscles
Pull out my skeleton

Don’t let me die, continue my pain
Just hurt, beat, and repeat
Don’t let me die, continue my pain
Just hurt, beat, and repeat

Don’t let me die, continue my pain
Just hurt, beat, and repeat
Don’t let me die, continue my pain
Just hurt, beat, and repeat

The levels of pain damage of soul
I'm becoming induced into pain
My soul and spirit aches of pain
This pain, is it all in my mind?

My wrists ache of mutilation
My legs twinge of running
My back aches of beatings
My brain aches of poison

Tear up my mouth with shears
Rip apart my flesh with pliers
Slice up my body with a machete
Take out my brain and use my skull as a dish

Commit surgery malpractice on me
Commit man slaughter on me
Commit exorcism on me
Commit necromancy on me

Lock me in an institution and torture me
Lock me in a tank and bomb me
Lock me in a cage and turn me into a monster
Make me your science project

Don’t let me die, continue my pain
Just hurt, beat, and repeat
Don’t let me die, continue my pain
Just hurt, beat, and repeat

Don’t let me die, continue my pain
Just hurt, beat, and repeat
Don’t let me die, continue my pain
Just hurt, beat, and repeat

I’ll say it again damn it

Don’t let me die, continue my pain
Just hurt, beat, and repeat
Don’t let me die, continue my pain
Just hurt, beat, and repeat
#3
sounds like theres a bit too much repetition, but if it sounds good to song doesn't matter
shnaps i own sorta:-steinberger spirit
-ol' samick strat replica
-harmony acoustic of some sort
-ibanez pro bass

amps:-2 micro cubes
-peavey rage 158
-gorilla somethin
-ol' danelectro
-crate bass amp