dude, you can play, the guitar sounded great, and your voice was ok, but it would sound much better if you sung louder, it's too quiet, belt it out and then it will be much better

...crit for crit for crit... (is that what it's called when you crit back and forth)
anyways if you've got time
Ibanez JS100
03 Squier Strat
1980 Ovation Matrix Accoustic
Peavey Valveking 112
Washburn T-14 Taurus (Bass)
SWR Working Pro 100 watt bass amp
The guitar part is good but i cant hear any of the vocals clearly. Try singing louder or turning up the input on the mic.
THanks for the avice, ill redo it but with more input on the mic.