#1
I just relearned this after not playing it for like 8-9 months. I think I pretty much got it down, but I dont wanna sound cocky. Please tell me anything i can work on, including 'stage presence', stance, etc.

Thanks

Oh and Ill check yours out too if you want. Just leave a link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qf7G3xCAcNc
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#2
Seems good to me, and you stuck one of those apple stickers on your guitar. I've done the same
#6
You played it amazingly, very impressed. y guitar, nice job.
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#7
sounds good. Jus ease up the distortion a lil bit. Its classic rock not heavy metal!!
Good job nonetheless.
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#8
That was great, my only critisicms are
-the trill around 0:17 was too quiet
-there was one note shortly after that, that didn't sound right cos you didn't bend it
-and that final bit at the end, you picked the notes a few times and it didn't sound right

but you did real good, I'm at my most nit-picking just to find things to say!

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#9
it sounded fine.. just lighten up on the reverb a bit
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#10
It was pretty good. Good job man.
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#11
WoW. I'm impressed. I think I can safley say( and people would agree) that this is the best cover Ive ever heard/seen of this song..ever


Keep up the good work man. And like the person above said,,,,nah don't turn down the distortion, it's a cover, make it your own. Sounds awsome..

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#12
1. You are missing a crucial note in the first run at 00:18-00:20 secs.
2. You have no vibrato on your bends (again, crucial in this solo) and too much vibrato on regular notes, try balancing between them.

- That's being anal.

Other than that, very good attempt. All your bends are in pitch which is an accomplishment in itself.
#13
Learn to play the whole song..then ill be impressed..no offence.
Why is it everyone posts intros,leads,fills but no whole songs?
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1. You are missing a crucial note in the first run at 00:18-00:20 secs.
2. You have no vibrato on your bends (again, crucial in this solo) and too much vibrato on regular notes, try balancing between them.

- That's being anal.

Other than that, very good attempt. All your bends are in pitch which is an accomplishment in itself.

I agree, you need to use vibrato on the bends, but other than that, great job!
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Learn to play the whole song..then ill be impressed..no offence.
Why is it everyone posts intros,leads,fills but no whole songs?


Actually I have quite a lot of whole songs on my soundclick, but recently I've been having trouble with my mic port, and can't record. The only way I have of recording is using my camera, and I don't frequently do whole songs with my camera (though I do have a couple on youtube).

Thanks for the crits everyone, i'll be sure to check yours out when I'm back from school
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#18
nice dude.. amp dist channel only? whats your amp??
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