#2
as is its not bad but could use some work. the riff after the intro could use some color or something mabey some chords or melodeys to make it sound less blah.

I like the use of the acoustic soloing over the electic toward the end. The only thing i can really tell you is that it was pretty repetitve it was really two riffs and the rythem for the acoustic solo through an electric solo in there some more riffs and mabey some more melodeys and harmoneys and youll have a pretty good song
#3
thanks man i need to keep it reasonably simple as i like to play stuff i write and i am not that good but now i have ideas where to go