#1
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I know this song is so over done but it is an amazing song and I decided I wanted to do my own version of it. So, any comments? I've been playing for about 1.7 years.

PS Sorry for the crappy tone, it's just my guitar plugged directly into my pc.
#2
well its not ur tone thats bad although some overdrive would help, r u playing with a metronome or clicktrack? that would help with ur timing n what not, but the solo isn't bad, clean tone sounds good for that bluesy improve stuff, and it sounds like ur attack (playing technique) needs to be a bit more aggressive, kill that sound machine!!
#3
yeah it sounds like its in time to me, but it could just be me. What do you mean by agressive?