dude...**** yah man...some sweet stuff..is that double bass drum? or some weird sound effect during the intro...
but it wud be awesome if u cud turn down the rec volume, it gets a lil fuzzy. And the tone of guitar could be improved too. But the melody is pure deathcore man. Just needs a lil tweaking. transitions are ok, but the vocal in the middle can be worked out too. just my two words, but if u were to record this in a good place, it wud sound so much better....

mind critting mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=542241
i feel like i just got hit with a ton of bricks... the middle part was cool though but deathcore isn't my kinda music, was that someone playing the double kik or was that computer??
Pretty crazy. What'd you use for the drum tracks/recording in general? Pretty decent quality sound. The track was an interesting check out once, but I don't know if I'd listen to it more thne that.
Main Gear:
Cort G-Series 254
Takamine EG345C 12-String
Fender Squier P-Bass

Peavey Classic 50
Laney HCM65B

$75 Junk Drums w/ B8 Hats/Crash/Ride
i used acoustica beatcraft for the drums.

its not very well structured, i know. im working on a new song now though! :]

keep 'em coming.