#2
your voice is pretty weak. work on that ok?
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#3
I like it. Just turn up the volume on the singing (if it's layered) and it will be great.
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#4
It sounds nice, but methinks that you need to work on the syncing of your vocal/guitar keys, if that makes any sense.
I mean, your guitar sounds nice, and your voice sounds nice, but they don't sound like they're in the same key.