#3
umm to me its just alright. its kinda repetitve and amathurish but im guessing your reletivly new to guitar so i cant penalize you for that. it really isnt a song its just kinda like two melodys it needs more of a structure.

Also the solo thing wasnt bad but sounded out of key in parts. All together it needs some work it doesnt really have a song structure to it. right now its just kinda 2 riffs. but the riffs are good

Crit mine https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=543622
#5
Quote by King ofKumbucha
The riff that starts on bar 35 sounds almost exactly like the begining of the NIM (Black Sabbath) verse riff.

well i haven't heard that song so i can't be critiscised for it.
#6
Quote by gibsonbrothers
added drums...........

and uh... thanks do i know you lol.