#1
not sure about the song name yet, but meh. i wrote this with somebody im in love with in mind.

c4c.

edit - video of me performing it roughly:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=8576744#post8576744

-Angel In Disguise-
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words to describe damien: beautiful, intelligent, funny, sarcastic, vain, sometimes crude, giddy.
good traits: ability to relate, sense of humour, smile, eyes, body, personality
bad traits: inability to show appreciation, AT TIMES overly sarcastic, inability to be
serious(thus making me feel dumb), paranoid over his appearance
basis: memories of our weekend and anxiety of when he leaves for uni
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verse
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I woke up this morning
your face on my mind
looking back to that morning
your hand was in mine

im tired of the lonely nights
i waste, away from you
whispering 'ive fallen'
and hoping its not true
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pre-chorus.
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and i cant stop
wishing i was with you
wishing i was there tonight

and i need you
if only could hear me
and breathe for me just like i breathe for you
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verse
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the memory of the night we spent
the kisses that we shared
with you laying ontop of me
telling me you cared

and waking with my arm so firmly
wrapped around your chest
made me feel so special
though i know i sound obsessed
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pre-chorus
-----
and i cant stop
wishing i was with you
wishing i was there tonight

and i need you
if only could hear me
and breathe for me just like i breathe for you
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verse
-----
so subtle were your fingertips
that graced the tips of mine
so beautiful, those eyes of yours
that leave me lost in time

and staring as you turn your back
and i wont have the strength to hold on
when you're gone
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pre-chorus
-----
and i cant stop
wishing i was with you
wishing i was there tonight

and i need you
if only could hear me
and breathe for me just like i breathe for you
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chorus
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and its tempting to say that i love you
but the cold look on your face screams otherwise
and its tempting to say "we're forever"
but forever ends when we say our goodbyes

and im hopeful to scream "i dont need you"
but the sky would surely fall before my eyes
but im truthful when i say "i'll miss you"
so please, go steady, angel in disguise.
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Last edited by x X t o c z. at Mar 14, 2007,
#3
wow, im not a fan of love songs, but this was pretty good, like angelx123 said very sentimental, im sure who ever u wrote this for is freakin goin to die (in a good way) when she reads this


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#4
thanks you two. =]

more please?
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#6
glad you liked it!

and no problem dude, of course. =]

added a link to a recording of it to the first post guys. please check it out.
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#7
holy shit man, amazing.... i wish i could take them and play it with my band it is just that good. i can totally see the lyrical progression and how it flows so well.....
#8
haha thanks man. really glad you like it. =]
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#9
I really Like the Song
The Flow Was Great.....The Lryics Were Awsome....And I Really liked The Chorus

And Whats Better? Its A Love song......Great Job Partner, Keep It up
#10
thanks alot mate. glad you enjoyed it.
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#12
ahah. i love that song. solo makes me gizz.

thanks for reading. =]
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