#1
This is technically two songs (it'd be two tracks on the CD) but the first is just a little intro to the second, so I think I can get away with it.

The Freefall Before The

This feels like being weightless
Like being free
Like being back in the womb
The pressure pushes the blood in our veins
Into brilliant shades of red and blue
And before we impact
We see ourselves in this tower of mirrors
Just long enough
To know that

IMPACT

We are all crumbling and falling apart
And our faces like glass
Give nothing away but reflections of pride
Hanging like flags
Above the clear blue skyline

Is this the end of the world as we know it?

We are all twisted like the words
On our tongues
Licking our wounds
Tasting for blood
As our faces like glass
Shatter under the weight of the
Clear blue skyline

Is this the end of the world as we know it?
The fire in our eyes burns our blood into
Brilliant shades of red and blue
But without this tower of mirrors we can't see
No we can't see that

We are all crumbling and falling apart

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#3
so I think I can get away with it.
Maybe... I predict modage though.

I'll probably crit this a little later.
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#4
not bad flowed very nicely keep it up
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#5
Nice song. I liked it, since it was a change from all of the bullshiit and happy garbage usually written about. I cant think of anything to complain about in it. IF you have time, crit mine, https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=543934
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#6
Maybe... I predict modage though.


Eh, I've done it before. We'll see.

Thanks for the reads, fellas. Crit for crat, as always.

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