#2
guitar sound out of tune which distract from the song itself, the vocals need to be improved both in volume and in the overall sound/tone. With those major problems it's hard to crit on anything else.
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#3
Yeah man, before you get out the mic and attempt to record another boring acoustic. Make sure your guitar is tuned.. at least. Good try and keep up the hard work.