#1
yerr. wrote this for the person i love. not quite perfected how i want it yet, but this is near enough. =]

edit: oh, and encase anybody notices, yes, im playing without a high e string. it snapped on me a couple days ago and i havent had chance to go buy a new one yet. =[

btw. you can find the lyrics here: http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=544146
crit them too please if you have a moment.


crit4crit.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=IE07q3O2Nv0
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#2
come guys. not a single reply?

i change the vid link to youtube now, btw.
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#3
Pretty good actually, tho the intro sounds familiar.. DId anyone tell you that your voice sounds somewhat like grant Niclos (Sp?) of Feeder.. Tho saying that I can only hear it slightly..

Over-all good song!!
#4
sounds really good
you have a really nice voice
your playing is solid and fits the song nicely
good choice to get louder towards the end - its a good change when the song could have started to get a little monotonous
overall really good singing, songwriting, and playing
the lack of an e-string didn't do much harm

crit for crit - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=546582
#6
thanks guys. critted back.
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#9
thanks for the feedback so far. =]
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#10
I don't want to sound like too much of an ass but jesus christ where else have I heard those four pop-song-chords before?
Pffft nothing special if you ask me.

But... the intention is there I guess.
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