#1
What was once inside has erupted into something much more
I tried to give it up, the thought haunts like never before
And what I had in me is something I truly, can't explain
But I didn't see it come out, nor did I feel any pain.

It's taken me by a grip
Torn me apart limb from limb
Entwined in my fingertips
But I can still say
Finally something was worth it
Changed my perspective for good
Never thought anything would
At least now I can say
It was worth it at the end of the day

I held it back for too long
Ignorance in me,
Thinking it was gone
Believe the truths that I tell
Its my advice you must heed
Unless you enjoy to bleed

It's taken me by a grip
Torn me apart limb from limb
Entwined in my fingertips
But I can still say
Finally something was worth it
Changed my perspective for good
Never thought anything would
At least now I can say
It was worth it at the end of the day

You don't know what till it's gone
Procrastinate and it drags out prolonged
I hadn't thought up a cure,
I didn't know it was there,
So how could I be sure?

If I could tell the people I knew one thing
It's that they should let out a bit from their mind
Before it erupts into something much bigger
Don't let your feelings build up over time.
#3
Interesting stuff, but there's a few things I didn't really like:
Quote by primusucks

It's taken me by a grip
Torn me apart limb from limb
Entwined in my fingertips
But I can still say
Finally something was worth it
Changed my perspective for good
Never thought anything would

At least now I can say
It was worth it at the end of the day

The rhyme for those two line is overdone, and the lines themselves stop the flow of the song.
Quote by primusucks

I held it back for too long
Ignorance in me,
Thinking it was gone
Believe the truths that I tell
Its my advice you must heed
Unless you enjoy to bleed

That line is very awkward, it sounds like you just hrew it in for the rhyme.
Quote by primusucks

If I could tell the people I knew one thing
It's that they should let out a bit from their mind
Before it erupts into something much bigger
Don't let your feelings build up over time.

The ending is raher weak when compared to the rest of the song and all rhyme has stopped here.

Good stuff overall, just try tweaking those lines somehow and it'll be perfect.