This is actually the most recent version of a bit of a sequel to another one I made. All I have ATM is a myspace URL,

In Sequence it should go "Belong", "Control", and "Unfinished(Not a title, means the song isn't done)".
Also, I'm more than open for crits. Feel free to rip it to shreds if you want.
It's actually pretty good. A bit repetitive. I would reccomend adding a few more layers to the melody. To change it up a bit, you know? Also, I personally think that the stranger the sound, the better.