#1
We haven't really established a stable band or anything, all we really do is jot stuff down on GP5, but we haven't actually done anything in a while. Sifting through some of the stuff we've made I found this, and I thought it would be a good first song to start working on.

Some stuff is kind of out of order, the tapping should go somewhere else, and the last part is just a non sensical break down type thing.

Can't really describe what it sounds like, just alternative rockish I suppose.

Just want some feedback on what to do with this stuff.
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untitled stuff.rar.zip
#4
Pretty awesome man, you should finish it.
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LOL ! muther fuker i was gonna say that LOL!
#5
That main riff was pretty catchy and a good hook. The rest wasn't that bad either, but it could use a little more...something. Maybe more riffs like the intro? I know the song isn't done yet, but i'd suggest keeping it short. I think 2-3 minutes would be a perfect length for this song. Looking forward to the finished song. Sort of reminded me of Senses Fail btw.

if you get a chance i'd appreciate a crit on https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=7518479#post7518479 or http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...386#post8592386

thanks a lot.
Last edited by Sarcasmo at Mar 16, 2007,