#2
I thought it was pretty good, exept i think the pre-verse gets a bit anoying
#4
those were some killer riffs. The riffs reminded me a bit of pantera exept of the chorus, that and the solo reminded me of like avenged sevenfold.

The only thing i can think of is make it longer it isnt really a song, it needs some length and more of a song structure

Have a look at mine if you get a chance
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=543622
#5
yup still workin on it
im kinda goin for a pantera/lamb of god feel
surprisingly, that solo was more dime inspired as i hate a7x
i want it to kinda be like megadeth's take no prisoners, it has different variations in the riffs so its not a basic song structure
im going (with some "pre" stuff in between) intro/verse/solo/breakdown/verse/chorus/faster breakdown leading into solo2/chorus/outro
something along those lines
my only problem is me keeping up with it cause its so fast lol
#6
the bends in the solo sounded quite off but the rest was good the first riff is quite boring but i suppose with a few layers sounds good, i can definitely see A7X in your main riff like it or not, lol, im not fond of them either but yeah overall pretty good
#7
Quote by ch715dallat
the bends in the solo sounded quite off but the rest was good the first riff is quite boring but i suppose with a few layers sounds good, i can definitely see A7X in your main riff like it or not, lol, im not fond of them either but yeah overall pretty good

noo its a slayer/LoG mix XD
a7x would be like
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-----6-----5-----3h5-
-0-0---0-0---0-0-----
 . .   . .   . .

or something lame like that damnit
lol
but thanks for the reply ive been workin on the bends in the solo i think it sounds good now ill upload it later
and the intro riff will be changed