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So Cold- Techno synth beat with robotic vocals and guitar solo at the end

Feel- Power ballad with ambient sounds

The Invasion- Similar to "So Cold," provides the story behind the band

The End- Piano song inspired by Bowie's "Five Years"
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Last edited by gthorn2000 at Mar 17, 2007,
#2
"The End" blows. Sorry, it just does. The piano is crap, and never plays on beat. "Feel" sounds good as does "So Cold".


Is "So Cold" a cover? I know I've heard that synth melody before. But I like the vocal idea in that song. Simple, but it leads the song perfectly.
#3
Thanks for the quick feedback! So Cold is original. I have never heard that melody before in a song, but if you come across a song with a similar melody, then send it my way.
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#4
i like so cold a lot, it has a big daft punk feel
turn the volume of vocals down a bit, its too unbalanced
i think you need to throw in some more effects (maybe try some backwards guitar) to vary it up during the verses
the solo is good, it really fits with the tone of the song, but you should turn down the treble a little bit to give it more of a full tone

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#6
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so cold is really good, the vocals could use some work. the synth is great

feel really isn't that good, although it does remind me of james taylor( actually a bit too much)

good stuff though

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I appreciate you're honesty. Could you elaborate on why you don't like Feel? I am aware that it is a power ballad, but I think it is a welcome break from some of our colder synth songs.
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#7
the vibe just isn't there. its like i was listening to the song, and it sounded like something i would dig, and i didn't, because the backing was wrong, or some other little thing i can't put my finger on

does that help?
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#8
Also, if you liked So Cold, listen to our new track "The Invasion."
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