#1
I've been in a pretty good mood today but wanted to write a song anyway. That being said, happy songs generally piss me off. That's why I wrote this piece. It's not particularly sad or angry but it does have a certain dark, gritty nature. It's relatively specific so you should be able to figure out what it's about.

Close Your Eyes

You’ve got something,
That you can sell,
You should take advantage,
It pays real well

Close your eyes,
And hold real still,
This will only take a second,
I promise it will

Go out now,
And buy some fun,
I need you to leave,
‘Cause your work here is done

Close your eyes,
And hold real still,
This will only take a second,
I promise it will

You best watch out,
Your work could end,
When someone wants a permanent,
Not rentable friend

You’ll go out,
In the backyard,
Six feet underground,
Where the lawn is marred

Close your eyes,
And hold real still,
This will only take a second,
I promise it will
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#3
It's alright.

The only thing is that since the phrases are so small, the rhyming sounds more like a cheer or something very upbeat. You could try repeating key phrases instead of rhyming it with another line.


Hope that helped.