#1
Alight so after a long break from ultimate guitar. I now return with a sample of my creativity.

I offer you Philosophy a song written for a extremely attractive girl in my philosophy class.

let me know what you hate about it so i can fix it up and then give it to her thus cementing my chances of getting a Extremely HOT GF


http://www.sendspace.com/file/pingzh

later
Class A Procrastinator and Class A Guitarist..
#3
Can you upload that to dmusic or myspace or something. Everyone including me will be alot more eager to stream it than download.
If the doors of perception were cleansed everything would appear to man as it is - Infinite.

http://thetravellingtrip.dmusic.com
^^ some sort of strange new slimey brew, its a psychedelic mess.
Check it out
#4
reviewing as i go long

interesting choice with 3/4 i think it works really well
i really like the mood in this piece
the drum loop fits the song pretty well
i'm split over the strings - the notes are nice but the sound quality isn't great - makes it sound very 80's
nice chord progression
i really like the little lead that you do in the middle - wish there was more, you've got good tone, and its sounds nice

good luck with the philosophy chick haha

crit for crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=546582
#5
Quote by Autopilot6
reviewing as i go long

interesting choice with 3/4 i think it works really well
i really like the mood in this piece
the drum loop fits the song pretty well
i'm split over the strings - the notes are nice but the sound quality isn't great - makes it sound very 80's
nice chord progression
i really like the little lead that you do in the middle - wish there was more, you've got good tone, and its sounds nice

good luck with the philosophy chick haha

crit for crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=546582


Thanks.. Ultimately I didnt play this song a way i wanted too because i couldn't decided on a good strumming pattern.. Not a drum loop I keyed those drums in myself

Laslty I dont plan on getting a sound click. Why, because either way you have to click on something to listen to it. And I"M no interested in putting my whole colection of media up for everyone to listen too yet. Plus my musiic still at best sucks.
Class A Procrastinator and Class A Guitarist..
Last edited by godofthesunn at Mar 18, 2007,