#1
heres just a little thing i made up

i made a few mistakes, ive played it perfect before.
im useing my fender strat american deluxe s1 and the s1 button is out
its on the first pickup, im useing a weird tone though

heres the link- http://fenderbender2joe.dmusic.com/

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fender stratocaster american deluxe SSS(s1)
G-DEC 30W amp
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silvertone acoustic

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#3
it has potential i guess, you need better tone, and need to work on making it more fluid, and your bends
#4
i have the same guitar its my baby haha
you have some good ideas and potential
you definitely need to work on your bends, timing, and picking accuracy
your playing is very pentatonic, which is fine, all the notes pretty much fit except when you bend
i think one thing you might want to try out would be to add some more chord changes to the rhythm track it would definitely make it more interesting
overall, keep it up, work on some of that stuff and i think you'll have a nice jam

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#6
yea, im adding chord changes next one i record, these were my first ones so i was just getting used to recording, the pick i was using has alot of grip on it so you can here it on the recording hitting the strings... ill use a pick with no grip next time
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Quote by x_themetalfan_x
For a second I thought the title said "I swallowed my dick".

my gear:
fender stratocaster american deluxe SSS(s1)
G-DEC 30W amp
custom carrying case
jasmine by takamine acoustic
silvertone acoustic

AMAZING GUITAR SOLO!!!
#7
hmm man you need to practice.

I guess the idea was good ,but you seriously need to work on your timing ,vibrato and bends.I dont know if it was out of tune or you was just pressing down on the frets to hard, but yeah theres something wrong with the tuning.

Try adding some dynamics in your playing change from the 8th note licks and add some short 16th note licks or something.
Learn alot of solos and jam over backing tracks alot.

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