#1
Verse 1
All these trees are turning blue,
May have fallen but can still reach out to
the ocean I'll carry one to the depth of the sea, but
when looking at the top
these shadowed hands are reaching out at me
Pictures can gather an disappear,

Chorus
Make me , make me alive
And.. Tell me, tell me something new..
Why do these hands look so lonely
Why do these hands look so lonely
Why does it feel so dead.
Make me , make me alive
and..Tell me, tell me something new
Why do these hands look so lonely..

Verse 2
all these trees are turning blue
Alone an shadowed, in crisp hallowness,
I feel the bark an touch the water, but its all so empty
I can feel all of its life aruond me ..
When brought home these leaves will fly,
Reaching forward an no longer at me
People gather, an dissappear,

Chorus
Make me , make me alive
And.. Tell me, tell me something new..
Why do these hands look so lonely
Why do these hands look so lonely
Why does it feel so dead.
Make me , make me alive
and..Tell me, tell me something new
Why do these hands look so lonely..


Bridge
Is this Is this something new
(slow soft acoustic strumming)
X2

END
#5
This is really good. I really like the fact that the song sounds good all the way through. With most people's songs, it starts out strong, but the later half feels kind of forced, but this stays strong all the way through. really good work
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