#1
Title is meh, it's all i could think of at the time.


Crit for crit, I just gotta know people are reading these


we're the boys you've been looking for
gentle hearts, outisde of lovers doors
but we're knocking on the face of failure

i'm a cloud king, resting on your good dreams
worse days will wish for better things
my hopes and means, still on the nine
but me and all my friends have still survived


so inspect us
please tell us what to wear
inspect us
our mothers taught us not to care

i have moved on to bigger and better things
but honestly, they've got the best of me
forwards feels forced, feeling for the past
take back the come backs, make it last

so, inspect us
please tell us what to wear
inspect us
we weren't ever known to care


don't burn me too bad
Last edited by iaoab at Mar 17, 2007,
#2
im a cloud king, resting on your good dreams

that line is very smooth. for the rest of the song it sounds angsty but that line is perfect.