#1
Alright, so I'm new here, and I figure I'll jsut start with something random. I wrote this one back in December. SO please tell me what you guys think, and maybe I'll post more.


I think I'll dive into the ocean
Let the waves wash away my memories
Come sink or swim
I'm never goin' back there again
And the days are growing longer
And the nights are getting colder
And still I think of you
You give me reason, show me what to do
You keep me dreamin', be my muse
You keep me tryin', you see me through
You keep me happy, show me things I never knew
You keep me breathin', know I live for you
I have seen the other side of me
I don't wanna see the things that I have seen
Too much heartache
Too much pain I cannot take
And if I make it to the shore
I'm never goin' back there no more
I think I'd like to stay with you
You give me answers when I haven't got a clue
You keep me goin' when I've done all I can do
You keep me steady, you make me someone new
You keep me happy and you know it's true
You keep me breathin', know I live for you
#2
This is pretty good..although some will say clicheish
And the days are growing longer
And the nights are getting colder
And still I think of you

There has to be another way to say what you wanted to say in that little phrase. Keep kicking it around until its not the same...
I got nothin to say so no one can hold nothin against me
#3
This is pretty good..although some will say clicheish
And the days are growing longer
And the nights are getting colder
And still I think of you

There has to be another way to say what you wanted to say in that little phrase. Keep kicking it around until its not the same...


You know I think that was actually the first line I wrote out of the whole thing, but yeah, you're right. Thanks for the tip.