#1
hey ive played guitar for a long time and i just started making my own songs, i like how my songs sound but im not sure if i like the lyrics i wrote. heres part of one song i wrote..

your just a boy
with nothing to do
you cant think for yourself
you try to think thats not true
so well dress you in white
now your like all the rest
theres no time to ask why
just pretend your the best


yea, im not sure if its good or not cuz i was never a poem person. plz tell me if you like or dont like and why if you want.. my email is fradyst@cadet.com
Last edited by Fradiation at Mar 17, 2007,
#2
Quote by Fradiation
hey ive played guitar for a long time and i just started making my own songs, i like how my songs sound but im not sure if i like the lyrics i wrote. heres part of one song i wrote..

your just a boy
with nothing to do
you cant think for yourself
you try to think thats not true
so well dress you in white
now your like all the rest
theres no time to ask why
just pretend your the best


yea, im not sure if its good or not cuz i was never a poem person. plz tell me if you like or dont like and why if you want.. my email is fradyst@cadet.com


hey man read the FAQ. it says to only post your thread title as the name of your song/poem.

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