#4
really good and fluent guitar work, thats some nice stuff there. the verse vocals are really good, the chorus seems like its a little bit of a stretch for the voice. still listening.... those really are some mad guitar skills youve got going. good work, keep it up
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#5
Turn your leads up as bit. Their so precious you can't afford not too
I agree that the vocals in the chorus sound a little stretched. Definitely let us know when you get the remixed version up so we can drop a proper crit.



http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=535143 can you give that a crit if you have time
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#6
Wow allstrats and al you both have a real nice feel to your music. Very cool you guys. Al, I was trying be part of the background in his song is why I did'nt have it louder, more like file kinda. I know allstrat, he should really find a better key to fit his voice. Maybe the guy who,s going to remix iy will tell him. Thanks for the comments guys.
#7
Geez you were trying to be background??.. Maybe you shouldnt play such badass guitar then .
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#8
that was some good guitar...the drums didnt seem to bad. maybe a little more bass drum. the bass was bad...sorry... overall i thought it was realy good, 8.5/10

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