#1
Hey guys...been goofing off trying to make my first solo, and here it is...let me know what you think! Criticism welcome.

Thanks!

P.S. I know the tone is really bad, I only have a little computer microphone =/

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Edit: New song uploaded.
My concerns so far are that the ending is kind of dull, and the part right after the climaxish high note stuff doesnt fit too well. What ya think?
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Last edited by Xinlitik at Mar 18, 2007,
#5
i like the solo. like the horror suspense feel i felt with your solo.. bad recording though.

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Thanks for the input guys. I tried to make it less generic sounding in this revision, what do you think about it now?

(Mods I hope I dont get in trouble, I guess I'm bumping, but I changed the solo quite a lot)

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#7
i think the bad recording sound makes its sound pretty kool, i didnt see a problem with it. except at the begining its a little too slow, but atleast u got faster in the middle. i think its good. ( better than mine)

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#8
its sounds pretty good. the mic did an ok job of recording it. maybe play a little faster (although i dont listen to metal so i cant tell you much there).