#1
I did this one a while back. The song cuts off after two choruses. But I used a backing track and played both guitars. Singing sounds pretty bad at some parts (especially the pre-chorus). but i wanted to see what you guys thought

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#2
pretty good,the vox didnt quite fit so well,but the guitar had some rough spots,but it s was all good,my school is gonna start havin a rock band now to play at football games and stuff,and we are gonna playin this...i give ya a 7/10
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#3
it was alright except for that little intro riff... gotta learn to bend
#4
Hmm, I think it sounds great. This song reminds of me such good things. I think overall it's nicely done. I'm checking out your other songs right now

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