#1
i think the message here is simple, i dident know what to write a song about so i wrote it about just that, nothing. (that is the right title)
this is only the first verse and the choruse and i cant be stuffed typing the rest up


I cant think what to write
Maby a song that’s not politically right
A song about what you fear
Ahhh f**k it lets sing about beer
I got writers block
Such a f***ing shame
Minds a blank
Now who’s to blame??????

No political view
No morale schemes
This song aint about
The girl of my dreams
No message to send
To the music I play
AHHH!!! F**K OFF!!!....
I got nothing to say
#5
The second bit was better than the first in my opinion. And that was good laugh, especially just for something when you can't think of anything to write about.

When I can't think of something to write about, I just jumble EVERYTHING together and it's comes out abstract
#7
Quote by TheSmilingGoat
i think the message here is simple, i dident know what to write a song about so i wrote it about just that, nothing. (that is the right title)
this is only the first verse and the choruse and i cant be stuffed typing the rest up


I cant think what to write
Maby a song that’s not politically right
A song about what you fear
Ahhh f**k it lets sing about beer
I got writers block
Such a f***ing shame
Minds a blank
Now who’s to blame??????

No political view
No morale schemes
This song aint about
The girl of my dreams
No message to send
To the music I play
AHHH!!! F**K OFF!!!....
I got nothing to say


I liked it, it's fun and a song i'm sure everyone has considered writing (some more eloquently than others).
#8
i hope you don't get too offended but it all sounds a bit 'good charlotte' to me. The kind of punk that isn't punk thing. I get the idea but i think you could take more time over it and really think how you can make the idea work. Its a nice concept, one which i have found myself writing or trying to write about a bit.
#9
Quote by TheSmilingGoat
i think the message here is simple, i dident know what to write a song about so i wrote it about just that, nothing. (that is the right title)
this is only the first verse and the choruse and i cant be stuffed typing the rest up


I cant think what to write
Maby a song that’s not politically right
A song about what you fear
Ahhh f**k it lets sing about beer <----Yes, let us!!
I got writers block
Such a f***ing shame
Minds a blank
Now who’s to blame?????? <----I like this line!

No political view
No morale schemes
This song aint about
The girl of my dreams <----Mine are...haha.
No message to send
To the music I play
AHHH!!! F**K OFF!!!....
I got nothing to say


I like it! It's a good start! 8/10
#11
thanks guys glad you liked it (bettyswollox: ouch 'good charlotte'??? thats a bit dissapointing but just so you know its not ment to be punk anyway, probly hard rock or maby even thrash or neo-thrash)
#12
Sweet, slap some music to it and you've got a hit! Seriously, I'd download it.
Does anyone know the song that goes: ba ba bah, ba ba buh, bu ba bum, ba ba bah, ba bu buh, bu bu bum, bu ba bu bu bum baam?