#1
"Feindliche Absichten"
http://neptune.dmusic.com/
I think it's somekind of mix between industrial/rock/electronic


Please listen to it all the way through, tell me what you think the genre is, and comment!

Thanks alot.
Last edited by NeptuneUK at Mar 18, 2007,
#2
I liked it, when the guitar started playing it actually reminded me of Pink Floyd a little. Although, I think the intro was a bit too long.
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#3
Critting as I listen.
I dig the intro, very nice. Kind of an "impending doom" feeling. You know?
Subtle addition of all the sounds, very nice. But rather repetitive. Might work out if you throw some sort of lyrics in. I really am digging the sound that kind of starts on the right, and spills everywhere. Guitar seemed a bit out of place, just the feel of the solo, I mean. It's bluesy, so it doesn't really fit well. It still sounds nice, though. Again, a bit too repetitive, but very nice overall. I would recommend some sort of lyrics in this, because it just feels kind of.. empty. Maybe rethink the guitar part, so it goes along with the feel of the song. Overall, I enjoyed it. =D
#4
it reminds me of the looms used to keep people in time lol
its really atmospheric. whatever it is that is pulsating is very nice
the drums fit it really well simple yet the keep the beat
do i spot a Clapton influence?
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#5
listening while criting
nice intro.. but too much reverb for my taste
wait a minute, still intro? i think its really long..
here you go, the guitar. like the riff you made. i like the bluesy riff
wait a minute, still the same riff and still the same drum beat?

i think the song is very repeatative and long.

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#6
This is awesome, I like your stuff a lot. You've got a real knack for creating ambience. The intro does go on a little long, but I've got no problem with that. The guitar is indeed very Floydian. This reminds me of Obscured by Clouds. Great work. What does the title mean?

Oh, and I have a full-band version of that acoustic thing I had earlier, if you care to check it out:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=547253
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#7
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i think the song is very repeatative and long.

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=538805


It's just not for the passive listener I guess.....

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This is awesome, I like your stuff a lot. You've got a real knack for creating ambience. The intro does go on a little long, but I've got no problem with that. The guitar is indeed very Floydian. This reminds me of Obscured by Clouds. Great work. What does the title mean?

Oh, and I have a full-band version of that acoustic thing I had earlier, if you care to check it out:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=547253


It is german for 'hostile intentions', I thought it fit that kind of atmosphere.
Last edited by NeptuneUK at Mar 18, 2007,
#8
Sound cool, remind me off the odd tracks you get on prog-rock albums.

I think the guitar solo kinda ruined the mood. Although i suppose you have to do something to stop it getting repetitive, but maybe build up a few more instruments.noises before the guitar solo.

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#9
I'm listening right now. This sounds very original. I like the weird drums in the intro (think they're reversed). It does sound very industrial, too. That phase synth thing sounds cool, too. This sounded cool. Thank you for your crit, too. This was very interesting. I don't think I've ever heard anything like it really. It's basically its own genre. Keep it up.