#1
okay um, this is my 1st song i've written vocals for, it's a progressive acoustic song. all criticism appreciated.

Here comes destiny
Can you hear it call your name
You say it doesn't matter
We just don't feel the same

Deception all around you
Just damn near consumes you
Why can't I find the truth in
Things that you said to me

Told me that I was something
My body tells me something else
Don't have to try stop me
Because It's already done

[Screaming Part]
YOU
LIED
YOU
DE
NIED
YOU
LIED
YOU
PRO
MISSED
ME
WE
COULD
ONE
DAY
BE
BUT
I
STOPPED
AND SAID

Here comes destiny
Can you hear it call your name
You say it doesn't matter
We just don't feel the same

Deception all around you
Just damn near consumes you
Why can't I find the truth in
Things that you said to me

Told me that I was something
My body tells me something else
Don't have to try stop me
Because It's already done
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#2
i particulary like this bit

Deception all around you
Just damn near consumes you
#4
never heard a progressive accoustic song with screaming....do you mean deathmetal-esque screaming?
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#5
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never heard a progressive accoustic song with screaming....do you mean deathmetal-esque screaming?


heh, well i couldn't think of anything else to call it.
but um the screaming is more metalcore style if i had to label it
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