#3
Well done m8!

The vocals are very good, and its clear that ur voice has potential. You kept tune pretty well too. Just watch out for when you hold the notes for a few seconds, it begins to sound kinda weak tho, just perhaps improve the sustain a little bit.

Guitars were very good, irrelevant of original.

a very good job!

Please would you be so good as to crit my song, link below

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=548391

Cheers. Keep it up!