#2
i think it flows, pretty good except the lead seems to be reapeteing alot in the begining, the background has a little too much distortion, like 1 notch at the begining, but then its fine. nice recording quality.

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#3
I like it, the guitar is really pretty. As for criticism, some of your solo stuff sounds too staccato, I dont know if you wanted it that way, but I think if you made it a little smoother and held the notes for the whole duration it'd sound nicer. Overall, good job though.

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#5
for the overall content of the song, i really like it. the open string pulloffs are a little offtime but still work pretty well. i like the outro too, the fuzz guitar seems a little bland tonewise, but thats your preference. some nice melodies in the lead as well. i also listened to stand, i really like the acoustic progression, in fact id say i like that one better than the other. nice work, keep it up. mind critting mine?
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#6
People seem to like Stand more than any of the other songs i put up there. Im glad people like it so much but I also feel like i have to try to top it on songs I write. Anyways, what would yall suggest for the tone on the rythem?
#7
i like a little more midrange and less treble, but thats just me. dont change it if its the tone that youre looking for, its your music
#8
the guitar was the best the solos need a little more practice and clean up your effects a little but overall good

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#12
Your lead tone. That isn't distorted, you've just got a lot of sustain on it. Or it could be a really low end distortion?
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#13
the lead has the same amount of distortion on it as the rythem. its about 2/3rds fuzz distortion.
#15
I didn't mind the tone, even though it was really fuzzy, but I think you could have used it to your advantage more and played like a grunge band - which would mean definitely changing the lead tone.
#16
i listened to both songs. ****ing great. timing is perfect got nothing to crit. which recording software do you use? i like the tapping thing in new untitled song.