#1
There's a fire in Tokyo!
There's a fire in Tokyo!
The wolves will drink wolf blood,
And stain their wolf clothes at the wolf party.
I'll see you stamping hands at the door,
I'm gonna rock your body.
I'm gonna wreck you, girl.

If we set the police station ablaze,
We'll be in Vegas by sunset.
If we drop acid in the casino cans,
We'll be a Mr. and a Mrs.
This is an announcement
On argument radio:
Lovers live longer!
So take the girl you know,
Kiss her on the cheek,
Lay a motherfucking mushroom cloud, motherfucker.
The paramedics and ambulances won't stand a chance.
Wade in the water, child.
#2
lol usually i would bash something like this really hard for its lack of structure and story.... but i must say i like it, mostly becz it just sounds like my lifestyle... lol its just kinda cool i guess
#5
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Looks like something System Of A Down would write lol

+1 but i did like it.. keep it up dude
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#6
I like it on the fact of its lack of structure, but you could probably work on the flow a bit. If you have time, crit mine: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=548313
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#7
I love the erradic fast paced-ness of this piece. The second stanza reminds me of a friend of mine. I can't say much more about it. Good job.
Does anyone know the song that goes: ba ba bah, ba ba buh, bu ba bum, ba ba bah, ba bu buh, bu bu bum, bu ba bu bu bum baam?